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Старый 16.10.2011, 19:30   #851
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Ребят,проверьте пожалуйста диалог на наличие ошибок) Заранее мерси (;


-Hi Вика, how are you?
-Hi Юля I'm fine and you?
-I'm bad
-Oh It's terrible. But why?
-My granny came to an elderly home! But I'm sure she must lives with me and my parents.
- Oh, I think it will be good for your granny live in elderly home , because your parents work all day , and you spend much time in school. You can’t looking for her full-time.
- Yes, but I don’t think that the elderly home is the best solution of the problem!
-Well, but the elderly home is provided to your granny professional nursing, all-time medical care and wheelchairs, isn't it?
- Yes, you right, but hold on. My granny was accustomed to her flat and her things. She would feel lonely and useless to anyone in elderly home. Also I sure that I will miss for her because I love my granny . I will miss for our interesting conversation, for her stories and wise advices.
- Oh, I don’t think that everything is so bad. You and your parents can visit her at any time.
- Yes, but everything will be different . I think that families become less close when they don’t care of one another .They lose their warm relationship . And I’m afraid that the same thing happen with our family.
- Oh, okey, I give up. You convinced me. I hope that your parents change their minds ,too .
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