Очень нужна помощь.
Надо проверить мое непутевое сочинение по английскому и придумать к нему заголовок

На завтра.
тема - внутренние качества главнее, чем внешность и т.п.
Сочинение
Some people think that only good-looking people are always kind and friendly. And there are people who think that only that people who do unusual things are good people. Just the other way round. Perfection consists not in doing extraordinary things but in doing ordinary things extraordinary well.
I guess that first of all person ought to be beautiful on the inside. Some people want to be like their idols. They run from one shop to another, trying to find fashionable clothes. They think only about clothes, make-up and different hairstyles. These people are silly. They don't understand that no matter how do you look, you ought to have a kind heart, you have to be considerate, reliable, devoted and cheerful. If you own such qualities, people will love you, even you are fat or have uneven teeth. Never forget, that personality mostly comes from the inside, not the outside